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Sunday, February 12, 2017

Sentence Modelling - due Friday, Feb. 17th


It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be broken. Imperfect. Chaotic. It's the universe's way of providing contrast, you know? There have to be a few holes in the road. It's how life is.
               
The Truth About Forever - Sarah Dessen

25 comments:

  1. Original:
    It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be broken. Imperfect. Chaotic. It's the universe's way of providing contrast, you know? There have to be a few holes in the road. It's how life is.

    Changed:
    It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be stupid. Ludicrous. Funny. It's the universe's way of giving us comedy, you know? There have to be a few crazy people in the World. It's how the Earth is.

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  2. The original version.
    It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be broken. Imperfect. Chaotic. It's the universe's way of providing contrast, you know? There have to be a few holes in the road. It's how life is.
    The Truth About Forever - Sarah Dessen

    My modified version.
    It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be graceful. Peaceful. Calming. It's the universe's way of providing us with tranquility, you know? There have to be some quiet moments. It's how yoga is.
    The Truth About Yoga- Raquel DeSousa

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  3. I like how you used the frame of the sentence, but you made it your own. I like the theme of tranquility!

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  4. Original:
    It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be broken. Imperfect. Chaotic. It's the universe's way of providing contrast, you know? There have to be a few holes in the road. It's how life is.

    Changed:
    It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be hard. Stressful. Questionable. It's the universe's way of providing skill development, you know? There have to be a few challenges. It's how life is.

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  5. Original: It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be broken. Imperfect. Chaotic. It's the universe's way of providing contrast, you know? There have to be a few holes in the road. It's how life is.

    Changed: It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be weird. Uncanny. Strange. It's the universe's way of giving us abstract , you know? There have to be a some creepy things out there. It's how things are.

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  6. Original: It's just that… I just think that some things are meant to be broken. Imperfect. Chaotic. It's the universe’s way of providing contrast, you know? There have to be a few holes in the road. It's how life is.

    Mine: It's just that… I just think that some things are meant to be scary. Haunted. Creepy. It's the universe’s way of providing fear, you know? There have to be a couple killer clowns in the way. It's how Halloween is.

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  7. It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be awesome.Perfect. Role models. It's the universe's way of being cool, you know? There has to be some awesome things in life. It's how the universe is.

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  8. It's just that... I just think that some things are meant to be different. Strange. Unpredictable. It's the universe's way of preparing us for the future, you know? There have to be some bumps in the path. It's how everything is.

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  9. It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be destroyed. Not right. Crazy. It's the universe's way of being cool, you know? There have to be a few ups and downs. It's how life is.
    Have a good day! lol

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  10. Original : It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be broken.Imperfect. Chaotic. It's the universe's way of providing contrast, you know? There have to be a few holes in the road. It's how life is.

    The Truth About Forever - Sarah Dessen




    Mine : It’s just that…. I think some things are meant to be free. Mutated. Divergent. It’s just the universe's way of spicing things up, you know? There have to be a some odd one out. It’s how everything is.

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  11. It's just that... I just think that some things are meant to be perfect. Happy. Good. It's the universe's way of giving back, you know? There has to be a rainbow after the storm. It's how it is.

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  12. It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be fixed.Perfect.Organized. It's the universe's way of being different, you know? There has to be a way for everything. It's how it is.
    The Truth About Forever - Sarah Dessen

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  13. It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be intact.Together. complete.It’s the universe’s way of showing us it cares, you know? There have to be some things not broken. It's how everything is.


    The Truth About Forever - Sarah Dessen

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  14. Original
    It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be broken.Imperfect. Chaotic. It's the universe's way of providing contrast, you know? There have to be a few holes in the road. It's how life is.
    -The Truth About Forever ~by Sarah D

    Mine
    It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be cut. Scary. Bad. It's the universe's way of showing the difference, you know? There have to be some bumps. It's how your time alive is.

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  15. It's just that... I just think that some things are meant to be cheerful. Pleasant. Ecstatic. It's the universes way of saying thank you, you know? There has to be some contented times. It's how it goes.

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  16. It's just that...I just think that some things are not meant to be explained. Unknown. A mystery. It's the universe's way of providing wonder, you know? There has to be a few things left to the imagination. It's how life is.

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  17. It's just that... I think that some things are meant to be perfect. Magnificent. Systematic. It's just the universe's way of giving hope. you know? There have to be some things that go the way you want. It's how the universe is.

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  18. Original:
    It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be broken. Imperfect. Chaotic. It's the universe's way of providing contrast, you know? There have to be a few holes in the road. It's how life is.

    Mine:
    It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be Funny. Happy. Nice. It's the universe's way of making memes, you know? There have to be memes in life. It's how it is.

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  19. Original:
    It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be broken. Imperfect. Chaotic. It's the universe's way of providing contrast, you know? There have to be a few holes in the road. It's how life is.

    Mine:
    It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be Funny. Happy. Nice. It's the universe's way of making memes, you know? There have to be memes in life. It's how it is.

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  20. It's just that… I just think that some things are meant to be lied about. Locked away. Leaked. It's the universe's way of being imperfect, you know? There have to be things kept away from the public. It's how politics is.
    The Truth About TRUMP -Alex Simon

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  21. It’s just that… I think that some things are meant to be different. Diverse. Unalike. It’s the universe’s way of being unique, you know? There have to be a couple of differences amongst us. It’s how it is.

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