"The writer who possesses the creative gift owns something of which he is not always master- something that at times strangely wills and works for itself." Charlotte Bronte
Friday, January 29, 2016
Sentence Modelling
I was alone and orphaned, in the middle of the Pacific, hanging onto an oar, an adult tigerin front of me, sharks beneath me, a storm was raging about me.
I was alone and scared, in the middle of the forest, hanging onto a branch, a wild bear underneath me, tree snakes above me, a panther was circling about me.
I was alone and orphaned, in the middle of the Pacific, hanging onto an oar, an adult tiger in front of me, sharks beneath me, a storm was raging about me.
Life of Pi by: Vann Martel
I was alone and scared, in the middle of the class, hanging onto my cue cards, a teacher in front of me, knees buckling beneath me, a wave of dread was swirling about me. Speeches by: Jaime Truong
I was alone and LOST, in the middle of the DESERT, hanging onto MY EMPTY WATER BOTTLE, a SNAKE SLITHERED BY me, SHARP ROCKS POKED me, a BIRD was FLUTTERING about me.
I was alone and LOST, in the middle of the DESERT, hanging onto MY EMPTY WATER BOTTLE, a SNAKE SLITHERED BY me, SHARP ROCKS POKED me, a BIRD was FLUTTERING about me.
I was alone and FEELING LONELY, in the middle of the DESERT, hanging onto MY WATER BOTTLE, a SCORPION BESIDE me, a MIRAGE IN FRONT OF ME, SAND was BLOWING about me.
I was alone and couldn’t breathe, in the middle of space, hanging onto a dead comet, a magical space lion behind me, aliens circling me, stars shooting about me.
I was alone in and lost, in the middle of the Sahara, hanging on to my lunch, a deadly bull behind me, scorpions surrounding me, a hole forming underneath me.
I was alone and tired, in the middle of the Sahara, hanging onto the a camel’s leg, a swarm of desert locusts above me, scorching sand around me, the wind was howling about me.
I was alone and hungry in the middle of the desert, holding on until found civilization, as I walked for miles, sand blowing in my face, soft sand under me, a sandstorm was raging beyond me. -Ryan
I was alone and afraid, in the middle of the jungle, hanging onto a vine, the evil banana’s trying to eat me, the evil pineapple’s trying to capture me, and Spongebob was talking about me. -Ella
I was alone and relaxed, in the middle of the hawaiian resort, hanging onto a smoothie, a waiter in front of me my family beside me, a series of waves was crashing about me.
I was alone and WITHOUT PARENTS, in the middle of the ATLANTIC, hanging onto A PADDLE, A FULL GROWN LION CHARGING TOWARDS ME, ALLIGATORS UNDER me, A RAIN CLOUD was FORMING about me.
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DeleteI was alone and scared, in the middle of the forest, hanging onto a branch, a wild bear underneath me, tree snakes above me, a panther was circling about me.
ReplyDeleteI was alone and orphaned, in the middle of the Pacific, hanging onto an oar, an adult tiger in front of me, sharks beneath me, a storm was raging about me.
ReplyDeleteLife of Pi by: Vann Martel
I was alone and scared, in the middle of the class, hanging onto my cue cards, a teacher in front of me, knees buckling beneath me, a wave of dread was swirling about me.
Speeches by: Jaime Truong
I was alone and LOST, in the middle of the DESERT, hanging onto MY EMPTY WATER BOTTLE, a SNAKE SLITHERED BY me, SHARP ROCKS POKED me, a BIRD was FLUTTERING about me.
ReplyDeleteI was alone and LOST, in the middle of the DESERT, hanging onto MY EMPTY WATER BOTTLE, a SNAKE SLITHERED BY me, SHARP ROCKS POKED me, a BIRD was FLUTTERING about me.
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ReplyDeleteI was alone and FEELING LONELY, in the middle of the DESERT, hanging onto MY WATER BOTTLE, a SCORPION BESIDE me, a MIRAGE IN FRONT OF ME, SAND was BLOWING about me.
ReplyDeleteI was alone and couldn’t breathe, in the middle of space, hanging onto a dead comet, a magical space lion behind me, aliens circling me, stars shooting about me.
ReplyDeleteI was alone in and lost, in the middle of the Sahara, hanging on to my lunch, a deadly bull behind me, scorpions surrounding me, a hole forming underneath me.
ReplyDeleteI was alone and tired, in the middle of the Sahara, hanging onto the a camel’s leg, a swarm of desert locusts above me, scorching sand around me, the wind was howling about me.
ReplyDeleteSentence Modelling - Lucas Silvestri
I was alone and smiling, in the middle of the sky, hanging onto a seagull, a giant eagle was left of me, bears above me, birds were swarming about me
ReplyDeleteI was alone and prepared, in the middle of the woods, hanging onto a tree, a white wolf beside me, the past behind me, the was shining on me.
ReplyDeleteThe moon was shining on me.
DeleteI was alone and hungry in the middle of the desert, holding on until found civilization, as I walked for miles, sand blowing in my face, soft sand under me, a sandstorm was raging beyond me.
ReplyDelete-Ryan
I was alone and afraid, in the middle of the jungle, hanging onto a vine, the evil banana’s trying to eat me, the evil pineapple’s trying to capture me, and Spongebob was talking about me. -Ella
ReplyDeleteI was alone and relaxed,
ReplyDeletein the middle of the hawaiian resort, hanging onto a smoothie,
a waiter in front of me my family beside me, a series of waves was crashing about me.
I was alone and tired in the middle of the chasm hanging on to a log, a bomb in front of me, a cave under me , dust was whipping about me.
ReplyDeleteI was alone and WITHOUT PARENTS, in the middle of the ATLANTIC, hanging onto A PADDLE, A FULL GROWN LION CHARGING TOWARDS ME, ALLIGATORS UNDER me, A RAIN CLOUD was FORMING about me.
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