"The writer who possesses the creative gift owns something of which he is not always master- something that at times strangely wills and works for itself." Charlotte Bronte
Friday, April 22, 2016
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"Dear God," she prayed, "let me besomething every minuteof every hourof my life." Betty Smith, A Tree Grows In Brooklyn
The words in blue.
ReplyDelete“Dear God,” he prayed, “let me do something nice every day of my life.”
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Redo by Sam
ReplyDelete“Dear God,” Bob prayed,“let me be the person I've always wanted to be in my life.”
“Dear God,” he prayed, “let me be the person I always wanted to be that I wished for, all my life.”
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“Dear God,” HE prayed, “let me DO SOMETHING NICE EVERY DAY OF my life.”
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ReplyDelete"Dear God," I prayed, "let me BECOME A FAMOUS ACTRESS SO I'M FAMOUS FOR THE REST OF my life."
-Chloe
“Dear God,” he prayed, “let me do something nice everyday of my life.”
ReplyDelete"Dear God," Joe prayed, "let me stay the best in everything for rest of my of my life."
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"Dear God" Jonathan prayed "let me play video games every minute of every hour of every day of my life."
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"Dear God," I prayed, "let me live my dream of being a vet, it's all I've ever wanted in my life."
ReplyDelete"Dear God," the pizza prayed, "let me be eaten within the next few hours of my life."
ReplyDeleteKatie Grant, The Lonley Pizza
“Dear God, “I prayed,” let me eat chocolate cake and ice-cream each day of my life.”
ReplyDelete~Noah :D (LOL)
P.S. EAT CAKE!!!!!
"Dear God," he prayed, "let me do things I can't do all my life."
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