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Monday, December 7, 2015

Sentence Modelling - Due Wed., Dec. 9th

They had a house of crystal pillars on the planet Mars by the edge of an empty sea, and every morning you could see Mrs. K. eating the golden fruits that grew from the crystal walls, or cleaning the house with handfuls of magnetic dust, which, taking all dirt with it, blew away on the hot wind.
                                                                                                   
                                     The Martian Chronicles - Ray Bradbury

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  1. they had a house of rising gas on the planet Jupiter by the edge of a rapid wind, and every storm you could watch the winds eating the small house that grew from the planet itself, or destroying the house with swords made of wind, which, taking all molecules with it, burned up on the blazing lightning.

    ~Noah ("*"_"*")

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    1. They had a house of rising gas on the planet Jupiter by the edge of a rapid wind, and every storm you could watch the winds eating the small house that grew from the planet itself, or destroying the house with swords made of wind, which, taking all molecules with it, burned up on the blazing lightning.

      ~Noah :D (small edit)

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  2. They had a house of sand dunes on the planet Mercury by the edge of a sea of acid, and every evening you could see oompa-loompas eating the copper grass that grew from the walls of the oompa-loompa castle walls, or eating the house with radioactive teeth, which, taking all dust with it, ran away on the highway of doom.

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  3. They had a house of dirt on the planet Pluto by the edge of a tall mountain, and every night you could witness a figure eating the odd-looking plants that grew from the foot of the mountain, or scraping the house with a cloth in their hands, which, tacking all grime with it, was buried on the vast fields surrounding them.
    By Jaime Truong

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  4. They had a house of dirt on the planet Pluto by the edge of a tall mountain, and every night you could witness a figure eating the odd-looking plants that grew from the foot of the mountain, or scraping the house with a cloth in their hands, which, tacking all grime with it, was buried on the vast fields surrounding them.
    By Jaime Truong

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  5. They had a house of wooden planks on the planet Earth by the edge of the flaming sink-hole, and every day you could hear Joe. Eating the brown books the grew from the sand or cleaning the house with his vacuum which taking all grime with it caught fire on the acid sea

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  6. They had a house of diamond furniture on the planet Venus by the edge of a rocky mountain, and every afternoon you could witness Mr.C eating the diamond berries that grew from the dark green bushes, or tending to the house with groups of vacuum robots, which taking all dust with it, washed away on the wild waves.

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  7. They had a house of fruit trees on the planet Saturn by the edge of a giant crater, and every night you could witness Billy Bob eating the green apples that grew from the fruit tree walls or covering the house with boatloads of colourful confetti, which, taking all aliens with it, blows off the planet after two years.

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  8. They had a house of GLASS TOWERS on the planet VENUS by the edge of a HUGE CRATER and every AFTERNOON you could WATCH ODELL eating the FOOTBALLS that grew from the GLASS BARRICADE of SWEEPING the house with ONE HAND, which taking all DUST with it, FLEW OUT OF SIGHT on the COLD BREEZE.
    Caps= changed words.

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  9. They had a house for FAIRIES on the planet SATURN by the edge of a WONDERFUL PALACE and EVERY DAY you could VIEW THE QUEEN eating the DELIGHTFUL BREAKFAST that grew from the DELIGHTFUL TREE, or SITTING IN the house with A FEW ROBOT BUTLERS, which, taking all MESSES with them, CLEANED UP on the WONDERFUL BALCONY.

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  10. They had a house of mineral structures on the Red Planet by th cleared ocean, and every dawn you could spot Mr. KFC eating the chrome plants that grew from the clear pillars, or chipping the house with small lightning bolts, which, taking all metal with it, evaporated on the cold water.

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  11. Sentence Modeling #3

    They had a house of water droplets on the planet pluto by the edge of an elephant herd, and every night you could witness elephants eating the trees that grew from water, or flying to the house with massive pieces of pie, which, taking all the other elephants with it flew out on the dawn sky.
    The martian Chronicles by ray Bradbury

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  12. They had a house of string cheese on the planet Tatooine by the edge of a sarlacc pit, and every night you could watch a Jawa eating the sarlacc tentacles that grew from the sarlacc pit, or littering the house with scrap parts of droids, which, taking all sand with it, flew away in the desert sky.

    Sentence Modelling -
    Lucas Silvestri

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