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Monday, April 2, 2018
Sentence Modelling - due Friday, April 6th
The first thing I learned that day was this: what you think you know about a person is only a fraction of the story.
Sentence modeling From The Universe Versus Alex Woods: The first thing I learned that day was this: what you think you know about a person is only a fraction of the story. by Gavin Extence
From Me The first thing I learned that day was this: if you think you know everything about a pear, you don’t, you probably don’t even know where it originates from. By Dennis
From The Universe Versus Alex Woods By Gavin Extence
Original: The first thing I learned that day was this: what you think you know about a person is only a fraction of the story.
My Version: The first thing I learned that day was this: I have been given many gifts, gifts that some people don't have. I should not take those gifts for granted.
By: Gavin Extence The first thing I learned that day was this: what you think you know about a person is only a fraction of the story.
By: Simon Choist The first thing I learned that day was this: If you beat yourself up about everything, and keep a poor attitude about everything you do, then it doesn’t matter how smart you are, or if you can get the right answer. What really matters, is if you can take yourself...and accept who you are.
Original: The first thing I learned that day was this: what you think you know about a person is only a fraction of a story.
Mine: The one thing I learned today was this: no matter how dark and horrible the world seems, no matter how much you feel like giving up, there will always be one person who will shine the light of hope to help you remember, you are not alone.
The Universe Versus Alex Woods Original: The first thing I learned that day was this: what you think you know about a person is only a fraction of the story. By: Gavin Extence
Mine: The first thing I learned that day was this: nothing will get better unless you do something about it, you don’t have to have powers to be a hero. By: Raquel DeSousa
original : The first thing I learned that day was this: what you think you know about a person is only a fraction of the story. by Gavin Extence
my version: The first thing I learned that day was this: never hug a porcupine. They might be kind of cute, but definitely not cuddly. by: Izabella Calderon
Original The first thing I learned that day was this: what you think you know about a person is only a fraction of the story.
By Gavin Extence
Mine The first thing I learned that day was this: Hot dogs are not real meat. They are made of incredibly disgusting pieces of meat that you wouldn’t think to eat until you bite into a hot dog.
Gavin Extence-
ReplyDeleteThe first thing I learned that day was this: WHAT YOU THINK YOU KNOW ABOUT A PERSON IS ONLY A FRACTION OF THE STORY.
Kyler-
The first thing I learned that day was this: MY FACE ACTUALLY LOOKED MUCH BETTER THAN I THOUGHT IT DID.
Thanks for reading!
Sentence modeling
ReplyDeleteFrom The Universe Versus Alex Woods:
The first thing I learned that day was this: what you think you know about a person is only a fraction of the story.
by Gavin Extence
From Me
The first thing I learned that day was this: if you think you know everything about a pear, you don’t, you probably don’t even know where it originates from.
By Dennis
Original:
ReplyDeleteThe first thing I learned that day was this: what you think you know about a person is only a fraction of the story.
Mine Variation 1:
The first thing I learned that day was this: My Internet is the fastest of them all.
V2:
The first thing I learned that day was this: I just ate a bagel.
V3:
The first thing I learned that day was this: I have turned 12.
V4:
The first thing I learned that day was this: Cigarettes give you very very bad diseases.
V5:
The first thing I learned that day was this: I am now scared of electricity.
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ReplyDeleteFrom The Universe Versus Alex Woods
ReplyDeleteBy Gavin Extence
Original: The first thing I learned that day was this: what you think you know about a person is only a fraction of the story.
My Version: The first thing I learned that day was this: I have been given many gifts, gifts that some people don't have. I should not take those gifts for granted.
Sentence Modelling
ReplyDeleteThe Universe Versus Alex Woods
By: Gavin Extence
The first thing I learned that day was this: what you think you know about a person is only a fraction of the story.
By: Simon Choist
The first thing I learned that day was this: If you beat yourself up about everything, and keep a poor attitude about everything you do, then it doesn’t matter how smart you are, or if you can get the right answer. What really matters, is if you can take yourself...and accept who you are.
ReplyDelete‘The Universe Versus Alex Woods’
By: Gavin Extence
Author: The first thing I learned that day was this: what you think you know about a person is only a fraction of the story.
Mine: The first thing I learned that day was this: when someone tells you something that’s too good to be true, it probably is.
The first thing I learned that day was this: people will do anything for a donut or two.
ReplyDeleteOriginal: The first thing I learned that day was this: what you think you know about a person is only a fraction of the story.
ReplyDeleteMine: The first thing I learned that day was this: look around. You see lots of things, but one thing you fail to see is the truth.
Sentence Modelling
ReplyDeleteOriginal: the first thing I learned that day was this: what you think you know about a person is only a fraction of the story.
The Universe Versus Alex Woods
by Gaven Extence
Cole versions
V1 The first thing I learned that day was this: how people think of dinosaur is way off.
V2 The first thing I learned today was this: kids have no power in the world of adults.
V3 The first thing I learned today was this: my lego is conspiring to attack me and my family and than take over the world.
Original: The first thing I learned that day was this: what you think you know about a person is only a fraction of a story.
ReplyDeleteMine: The one thing I learned today was this: no matter how dark and horrible the world seems, no matter how much you feel like giving up, there will always be one person who will shine the light of hope to help you remember, you are not alone.
The Universe Versus Alex Woods
ReplyDeleteOriginal: The first thing I learned that day was this: what you think you know about a person is only a fraction of the story.
By: Gavin Extence
Mine: The first thing I learned that day was this: nothing will get better unless you do something about it, you don’t have to have powers to be a hero.
By: Raquel DeSousa
original :
ReplyDeleteThe first thing I learned that day was this: what you think you know about a person is only a fraction of the story.
by Gavin Extence
my version:
The first thing I learned that day was this: never hug a porcupine. They might be kind of cute, but definitely not cuddly.
by: Izabella Calderon
Original
ReplyDeleteThe first thing I learned that day was this: what you think you know about a person is only a fraction of the story.
By Gavin Extence
Mine
The first thing I learned that day was this: Hot dogs are not real meat. They are made of incredibly disgusting pieces of meat that you wouldn’t think to eat until you bite into a hot dog.
By Austin