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Tuesday, April 17, 2018
Sentence Modelling - due Friday, April 20th
One must be careful of books, and what is inside them, for words have the power to change us. The Infernal Devices by Cassandra Clare
Sentence modelling - due Friday The Infernal Devices, book one. By Cassandra Clare. sentence modeling be Cole William Rennie Sas
Original One must be careful of books, and what is inside them, for words have the power to change us.
Cole version(s) Version 1. One must be careful of vacations, and what food is there, for the food has lots of power to disgust us.
Version 2. One must be careful of Lego, and what we do with it, for stepping on it has the power to really hurt us.
Version 3. One must be careful of parents, and what TV policies they have, for the amount of screen time has the power to disappoint us.
Version 4. One must be careful of old books, and what the page quality is like, for the pages have the power to very easily paper cut us. (Trust me. I have had many experiences with old books and paper cuts, mostly from my grandparents’ house)
Version 5. One must be careful of Wikipedia, and what possibly wrong information it has, for the possibly wrong information has the power to make us get bad grades, which has the power to humiliate us.
Sentence modelling The Infernal Devices by Cassandra Clare
Original: One must be careful of books, and what is inside them, for words have the power to change us. My version: One must be careful of people, and what they mean when speaking, for others do not have the power to define us.
The Infernal Devices by Cassandra Clare- One must be careful of BOOKS, and what IS INSIDE THEM, for WORDS HAVE THE power to CHANGE us. Kyler- One must be careful of ELECTRONIC DEVICES, and what TIME WE SPEND ON THEM, for EVEN ELECTRONICS HOLDS ELECTRIFYING power to ADDICT us.
Original: One must be careful of books, and what is inside them, for words have the power to change us.
The deeper version (mine): One must be careful of human ambition, and what power it has, for faith holds the power to destroy or inspire us.
The funnier version (still mine): One must be careful of toddlers, and what their screams are like, for the scream of a toddler has the power to overcome us.
Original from The Infernal Devices by Cassandra Clare: One must be careful of books, and what is inside them, for words have the power to change us.
My Version: One must be careful of homework, and what happens if you don't finish it, for teachers have the evil power to punish us with homework slips.
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ReplyDeleteThe Infernal Devices, book one. By Cassandra Clare.
sentence modeling be Cole William Rennie Sas
Original
One must be careful of books, and what is inside them, for words have the power to change us.
Cole version(s)
Version 1. One must be careful of vacations, and what food is there, for the food has lots of power to disgust us.
Version 2. One must be careful of Lego, and what we do with it, for stepping on it has the power to really hurt us.
Version 3. One must be careful of parents, and what TV policies they have, for the amount of screen time has the power to disappoint us.
Version 4. One must be careful of old books, and what the page quality is like, for the pages have the power to very easily paper cut us. (Trust me. I have had many experiences with old books and paper cuts, mostly from my grandparents’ house)
Version 5. One must be careful of Wikipedia, and what possibly wrong information it has, for the possibly wrong information has the power to make us get bad grades, which has the power to humiliate us.
Sentence modelling
ReplyDeleteThe Infernal Devices by Cassandra Clare
Original: One must be careful of books, and what is inside them, for words have the power to change us.
My version: One must be careful of people, and what they mean when speaking, for others do not have the power to define us.
Book by: Cassandra Clare
ReplyDeleteOriginal: One must be careful of books, and what is inside them, for words have the power to change us.
Mine: One must be careful of lies, ,and what they seem to tell you, for karma holds the power to haunt us.
Mine: One must be careful of video games, and what they contain, for blue light has the power to destroy us.
ReplyDeleteOne must be careful of the circus, and what it contains, for clowns have the power to scare us.
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The Infernal Devices by Cassandra Clare-
ReplyDeleteOne must be careful of BOOKS, and what IS INSIDE THEM, for WORDS HAVE THE power to CHANGE us.
Kyler-
One must be careful of ELECTRONIC DEVICES, and what TIME WE SPEND ON THEM, for EVEN ELECTRONICS HOLDS ELECTRIFYING power to ADDICT us.
Thanks!
-Kyler
One must be careful of donuts, and what flavour they are, for donuts have the power to destroy us.
ReplyDeleteoriginal from The Infernal Devices by Cassandra Clare:
ReplyDeleteOne must be careful of books, and what is inside them, for words have the power to change us.
My version:
One must be careful of dogs, and what they can do when you don’t train them, for dogs bear the power to bite us.
Original: One must be careful of books, and what is inside them, for words have the power to change us.
ReplyDeleteThe deeper version (mine): One must be careful of human ambition, and what power it has, for faith holds the power to destroy or inspire us.
The funnier version (still mine): One must be careful of toddlers, and what their screams are like, for the scream of a toddler has the power to overcome us.
Original sentence from The Infernal Devices, By: Cassandra Clare.
DeleteOriginal from The Infernal Devices by Cassandra Clare: One must be careful of books, and what is inside them, for words have the power to change us.
ReplyDeleteMy Version: One must be careful of homework, and what happens if you don't finish it, for teachers have the evil power to punish us with homework slips.
The Infernal Devices by Cassandra Clare
ReplyDeleteOriginal: One must be careful of books, and what is inside them, for words have the power to change us.
Mine: One must be careful of wolves, and what they are feeling, for if they are feeling hungry, they will have the power to eat us.
The Infernal Devices
ReplyDeleteOriginal: One must be careful of books, and what is inside them, for words have the power to change us.
By: Cassandra Clare
Mine: One must be careful of others, and what makes them tick, for they might use their power to manipulate us.
By Raquel DeSousa
Original (The Infernal Devices):
ReplyDeleteOne must be careful of books, and what is inside them, for words have the power to change us.
Mine:
One must be careful of burgers, and what meat it contains them, for bacon has the power to put us in a trance.